Monday, November 7, 2011

What type of poem is this?

Well, line 5 rhymes with 3 and 4, contrary to what to you said. I do not recognize a form. Maybe you should take into account the number of syllables and the rhythm too. Why not try to write in 10 syllable lines, with an iambic rhythm (one unstressed and one stressed, alternately)?

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